Comments on: Last Night

By: Jordan

Jordan — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 13:55:08 +0000

Coffee Jill, I could probably do the cupcake, not sure about the story fix. My friend did make a good point when she came up with my hero’s conflict and a possible black moment the other day. She said that it’s far easier to fix someone else’s story than it is to fix your own. I do believe she has something there. (wg)

By: Jordan

Jordan — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 13:52:53 +0000

Jill, LOL! I did mention a friend of mine came up with the idea to fix mine, right? Besides I don’t think my car can make it through all the beautiful snow you have up there.

By: coffee jill

coffee jill — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 13:40:06 +0000

Yeah, and uh, mine. And bring a chocolate cupcake while you’re at it.

By: Jill

Jill — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 13:22:14 +0000

Well now that you’re story has come together, come on over here and fix mine.

By: Jordan

Jordan — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 03:00:22 +0000

Thanks Sylvia and Amy. I’m not there yet, but I’m getting closer.

By: Amy K.

Amy K. — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 02:34:16 +0000

Congrats on the story taking shape!

By: Sylvia Day

Sylvia Day — Fri, 01 Apr 2005 00:52:43 +0000

Yay!! on the story coming together.

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 31 Mar 2005 22:41:22 +0000

Cece! You are SO bad. (evil grin)

By: Cece

Cece — Thu, 31 Mar 2005 18:49:44 +0000

I really hate the brawny commercial with the guy from sliders but he’s got a nice package (OMG I said that out loud) and the other one, with the tooth paste now that was just damned funny!

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 31 Mar 2005 18:17:27 +0000

Coffee Jill, I just think it’s hilarious and I agree about the bed part. That’s too funny that your critique partner really knows him. LOL!