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	<title>Comments on: One Critique Down, One to Go</title>
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	<description>Romance Writer &#38; Urban Fantasy Novelist</description>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2272</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 17:32:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Chey &#038; Lynn! The edits will definitely make the story better. No doubt.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Chey &#038; Lynn! The edits will definitely make the story better. No doubt.</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 17:32:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Shannon, I can absolutely relate to the perfectionist. It's brutal. I rarely ignore a critique unless it's something I know the character would do or say. I know I'd be at a loss if someone told me to rewrite a chunk of a book. (I hear other authors talking about receiving those kinds of edits. They terrify me.)
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Shannon, I can absolutely relate to the perfectionist. It&#8217;s brutal. I rarely ignore a critique unless it&#8217;s something I know the character would do or say. I know I&#8217;d be at a loss if someone told me to rewrite a chunk of a book. (I hear other authors talking about receiving those kinds of edits. They terrify me.)</p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Daniels</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2270</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Daniels</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 16:07:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Of course they'll love it.  All the edits only serve to make it a better story, right?  Good luck!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Of course they&#8217;ll love it.  All the edits only serve to make it a better story, right?  Good luck!</p>
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		<title>By: Cheyenne McCray</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2269</link>
		<dc:creator>Cheyenne McCray</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 14:21:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good luck with the rewrite, and I'm sure your fans will love it!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good luck with the rewrite, and I&#8217;m sure your fans will love it!</p>
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		<title>By: Cece</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cece</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 13:24:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cough Cough Indeed!!!!!!!!!!! *g*
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cough Cough Indeed!!!!!!!!!!! *g*</p>
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		<title>By: Shannon</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2267</link>
		<dc:creator>Shannon</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 13:05:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Getting back an edited manuscript is oftentimes the most agonizing and depressing moment for me. I love that someone can give me honest constructive criticism but a part of me is miffed that it still had errors. Being a perfectionist by nature I sometimes take every little error as a chink in my perfection armour. With each write, rewrite and edit I hope that the story improves but there are occasions where I entirely ignore the edit if I know that it's something that takes away from my characters. Generally speaking though I've looked at the manuscript so long I miss the little oops errors and am grateful that a fresh set of eyes can spot them.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Getting back an edited manuscript is oftentimes the most agonizing and depressing moment for me. I love that someone can give me honest constructive criticism but a part of me is miffed that it still had errors. Being a perfectionist by nature I sometimes take every little error as a chink in my perfection armour. With each write, rewrite and edit I hope that the story improves but there are occasions where I entirely ignore the edit if I know that it&#8217;s something that takes away from my characters. Generally speaking though I&#8217;ve looked at the manuscript so long I miss the little oops errors and am grateful that a fresh set of eyes can spot them.</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2266</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 03:44:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Lili! I often ask myself those same questions. *g*
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Lili! I often ask myself those same questions. *g*</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2265</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 03:43:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cece, Yeah, that's the hard part. Cough! Cough! Cough!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cece, Yeah, that&#8217;s the hard part. Cough! Cough! Cough!</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2264</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 03:43:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Silma, I hope you're right because I won't be reading this thing again once I'm finished with the edits. LOL!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Silma, I hope you&#8217;re right because I won&#8217;t be reading this thing again once I&#8217;m finished with the edits. LOL!</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2005/06/20/one-critique-down-one-to-go/#comment-2263</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Jun 2005 03:42:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Dream/Raine and congrats on the release!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Dream/Raine and congrats on the release!</p>
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