I’ve managed to rewrite chapter four of my paranormal. I couldn’t figure out why it wasn’t working for me. I’d tweaked it several times and nothing seemed to help. Then it occurred to me that I’d started the chapter in the wrong POV (point of view). I changed it around yesterday and plan to read it today to see if that ‘fixed’ the problem. The scene’s important since it’s where the hero and heroine officially meet. Keep your fingers crossed for me. I’m going in.
July 28th, 2005