Comments on: Friends & Reading

By: Jordan

Jordan — Fri, 30 Jun 2006 15:03:09 +0000

Cece, I’ll probably end up seeing Superman, but if I had to choose between that and Pirates, it’s not contest. Argh!

By: cece

cece — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 21:27:31 +0000

Jordan I’m so torn between seeing Superman and Pirates *sigh*

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 19:13:57 +0000

That’s funny, Charli! I was thinking about going back to pilates now that boot camp is over, but that’s not what I was referring to here. *ggg*

By: Charlene

Charlene — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 18:36:01 +0000

Oh, man, I’m brain damaged! I read that as “Pilates starts in a week and a half”. Totally different meaning on the Argh for that! Pirates, much more fun.

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:12:20 +0000

Tempest, That movie is full of eye candy. The fact that it’s fun makes it all the better. I can’t wait!

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:11:24 +0000

Bailey, You can bet I will by Sunday, when the times are posted. *ggg* I will be there the morning after opening. I’ve already warned dh that if it’s good, we’ll be seeing it at LEAST three times.

By: Tempest Knight

Tempest Knight — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:10:19 +0000

Oh, I love it when my CPs send me back their crits! I see my work under a different light, and it gives me a boost.

Pirates start next week? OMG! I’ve been so cook up in my room writing that I’m totally out of touch with the world. But I’m going to see the movie. Love Johnny Depp as Jack Sparrow! *g*

By: Jordan

Jordan — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 14:09:26 +0000

Silma, I’m that silly now. Blush. (wg)

I agree with you about the fresh eyes. She didn’t actually critique my story. She was looking to fix specific things that the editor had problems with. Things that she’s particularly good at. And it helped tremendously.

By: Bailey Stewart

Bailey Stewart — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 11:10:51 +0000

And you don’t have it broken down into hours and minutes yet? LOL

Yes, fresh eyes = fresh viewpoints. It always helps a lot.

By: Silma

Silma — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 10:46:12 +0000

My 14-year-old goddaughter and I are going to see Pirates of the Caribbean 2 the very first day. She already bought the new posters of the movie with Orlando Bloom. *rolls eyes and grins* Please, someone tell me I wasn’t that silly at her age.

As for the story, it’s always great to have fresh eyes going over your work. They can spot things our tire ones can’t. I love to receive those critiques ‘coz they are so enlightening. Good luck with the edits! I hope you get the story done soon!