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	<title>Comments on: 10,000 Words In And The Book Is Humming Along</title>
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		<title>By: Jordan Summers</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2012/09/13/10000-words-in-and-the-book-is-humming-along/comment-page-1/#comment-21022</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan Summers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Sep 2012 03:33:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Bernard, LOL! I do indeed know where I&#039;m dropping the ball. The problem is I don&#039;t know how to &#039;fix&#039; the issues. :-/]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bernard, LOL! I do indeed know where I&#8217;m dropping the ball. The problem is I don&#8217;t know how to &#8216;fix&#8217; the issues. :-/</p>
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		<title>By: BernardL</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2012/09/13/10000-words-in-and-the-book-is-humming-along/comment-page-1/#comment-21021</link>
		<dc:creator>BernardL</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Sep 2012 01:40:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That is truly a fine line, my friend. From the tone of your answer, it almost seems to me like you already know where you&#039;re dropping the ball, and you&#039;re looking for some kind of confirmation. I&#039;ll handle this. Okay, you... you know what you&#039;re doing wrong, change it! I take checks or credit.  :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That is truly a fine line, my friend. From the tone of your answer, it almost seems to me like you already know where you&#8217;re dropping the ball, and you&#8217;re looking for some kind of confirmation. I&#8217;ll handle this. Okay, you&#8230; you know what you&#8217;re doing wrong, change it! I take checks or credit.  <img src='http://www.jordansummers.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Jordan Summers</title>
		<link>http://www.jordansummers.com/2012/09/13/10000-words-in-and-the-book-is-humming-along/comment-page-1/#comment-21019</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan Summers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2012 21:50:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Bernard, LOL! Do you think he&#039;d go for it? ;) There are actually a LOT of writers who are far better at the writing craft who could help me. I study two of them, but there&#039;s a difference between studying their work and having someone point out where you&#039;re dropping the ball in your own books. I need someone to point out what I&#039;m doing wrong and give me very clear instructions on how to fix the bad habits.

It&#039;s definitely a fine line to walk. I have VERY specific things that I&#039;d like to work on. I&#039;m not looking for an all around writing coach. I don&#039;t need someone to encourage me to finish the book. I&#039;m looking for someone who can teach me how to take my writing to the next level. (Not the top level, just the next level.) Fortunately, I have an amazing BS detector, so I can avoid a lot of pitfalls that come with this type of search.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Bernard, LOL! Do you think he&#8217;d go for it? <img src='http://www.jordansummers.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  There are actually a LOT of writers who are far better at the writing craft who could help me. I study two of them, but there&#8217;s a difference between studying their work and having someone point out where you&#8217;re dropping the ball in your own books. I need someone to point out what I&#8217;m doing wrong and give me very clear instructions on how to fix the bad habits.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s definitely a fine line to walk. I have VERY specific things that I&#8217;d like to work on. I&#8217;m not looking for an all around writing coach. I don&#8217;t need someone to encourage me to finish the book. I&#8217;m looking for someone who can teach me how to take my writing to the next level. (Not the top level, just the next level.) Fortunately, I have an amazing BS detector, so I can avoid a lot of pitfalls that come with this type of search.</p>
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		<title>By: BernardL</title>
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		<dc:creator>BernardL</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2012 15:10:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[You&#039;ve already garnered a New York publishing contract, so you&#039;ve made it way past most authors and their writing. Unless you can talk Stephen King into becoming your private coach, who the heck could you garner out of a peer group above where you&#039;ve already been that you could trust to improve your writing?  :)

You&#039;re getting outside editing help which is always a chore well worth the investment if one can make it. With the other stuff, you may be in danger of seeking the art of the &#039;craft&#039; Holy Grail so hard that the stories don&#039;t have any room to maneuver in your head.  :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;ve already garnered a New York publishing contract, so you&#8217;ve made it way past most authors and their writing. Unless you can talk Stephen King into becoming your private coach, who the heck could you garner out of a peer group above where you&#8217;ve already been that you could trust to improve your writing?  <img src='http://www.jordansummers.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>You&#8217;re getting outside editing help which is always a chore well worth the investment if one can make it. With the other stuff, you may be in danger of seeking the art of the &#8216;craft&#8217; Holy Grail so hard that the stories don&#8217;t have any room to maneuver in your head.  <img src='http://www.jordansummers.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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